The Last Twenty-Four Hours
Read Chapter 11: The Silent ToDo
The stewardess’s voice was syrup poured over steel. “Quarantine, miss. Standard procedure. The doctor’s orders.”
Evelyn stood in the doorway of Margaret O’Leary’s empty berth, the narrow bunk stripped to its ticking, a single coarse blanket folded at the foot. The air still carried the ghost of lavender water and coal dust. She had been here—what?—an hour ago? Two? The loop’s hours were slippery, elastic, but the absence was absolute. Margaret was gone.
“Quarantine where?” Julian asked, stepping past Evelyn into the room. His voice was calm, but his eyes were already sweeping the floor, the walls, the thin mattress.
The stewardess—a round-faced woman with wire spectacles and a name pinned to her apron that read *HOPKINS*—hovered in the corridor, twisting her hands. “The hospital, sir. Third class, aft. Dr. O’Loughlin’s ward. She came over faint after breakfast, and with the influenza going round—” She stopped, swallowed. “We’re to keep her comfortable until we reach New York.”
“I need to see her,” Evelyn said. It came out sharper than she intended. “She’s a relation.”
Hopkins’s eyes flicked to the corridor’s far end, then back. “I’m sorry, miss. Doctor’s orders are strict. No visitors. Infection risk.”
Evelyn opened her mouth to argue, but Julian’s hand closed on her elbow, featherlight. She stopped.
“Of course,” Julian said smoothly. “We understand. Thank you.”
Hopkins nodded once, too quickly, and withdrew down the corridor, her footsteps fading into the low hum of the ship.
Evelyn turned on him. “What are you doing? She’s the only one who knows where Margaret is, and you just—“
“She’s lying,” Julian said quietly.
Evelyn blinked. “What?”
He was already on his knees, scanning the floorboards near the bunk. “The stewardess. She said Margaret came over faint after breakfast. But Margaret’s been hiding down here for twenty years. She doesn’t take breakfast in the dining hall. Too risky. Fleet was bringing her meals to the cabin—it’s why he was so nervous when we knocked.” He ran his fingers along the gap between the wall and the floorboards. “That story was rehearsed. She was waiting for us to ask.”
Evelyn stared at him. The logic was clean, brutal, right. She’d spent the last few loops learning to read Julian’s instincts. They had not yet failed her.
“Then where is she?” she asked.
Julian didn’t answer. His fingers had stopped moving. He was bent low, peering beneath the bunk, and when he straightened, there was something in his palm. Small. Brass. A hairpin, curved like a fishhook, its tip bent at an unnatural angle.
“That’s nothing,” Evelyn said. “Every woman on the ship owns a hairpin.”
Julian’s face had gone pale. “Not like this one.” He turned it over. On the underside, near the clasp, was a tiny engraving—a single line of script so small she had to lean in to read it. *M.O.*
Margaret O’Leary’s monogram.
“She dropped it deliberately,” Julian said. “She wanted us to find it.”
“Dropped it where? She wasn’t here when we arrived. The stewardess said—“
“The stewardess said she was moved,” Julian cut in. “But look at the floor.” He pointed. At the base of the bunk, the dust had been swept into neat, deliberate lines—the mark of a floor mop recently applied. And pressed into the dust, a single footprint, heel-deep, toes angled toward the door. A man’s boot. Too large for Hopkins, too broad for Fleet’s narrow feet.
Evelyn’s skin prickled. “Someone took her. Not quarantine. Took her.”
“Or she ran,” Julian said. He turned the hairpin over in his fingers. “Either way, she left this behind on purpose. It’s a marker. A clue. She knew we’d come back here.”
“How would she know that? She’s never spoken to us. We only saw her through the crack in the door for a few seconds before—“
“Before she recognized you,” Julian finished. “Before she realized who you are. Her granddaughter. The Ashworth who would come looking for her.” He looked up, and his eyes were dark with something Evelyn couldn’t name. “She knew you’d find this cabin again. She prepared it for you.”
The word *prepared* hung in the air. Evelyn felt the floor tilt beneath her—not the gentle roll of the ship, but something deeper, stranger. The loop was not just repeating history. It was *listening*. Adjusting. Leaving breadcrumbs for her to follow.
She knelt beside Julian, took the hairpin from his hand. It was cold, heavier than it should have been. She turned it over. On the inner curve, almost invisible against the brass, was a faint line. Scratched, not engraved. Recent.
*4:00. Lifeboat 6.*
Her breath caught. “This isn’t a marker,” she said slowly. “It’s a message. She’s telling us where she’ll be.” She looked up at Julian. “But why would she write it on a hairpin and drop it on the floor, where anyone could find it?”
Julian was still staring at the hairpin. His jaw worked. “She didn’t drop it,” he said. “She *planted* it. She wanted anyone who came looking to find it—to find the message. But she didn’t write it for us.”
“Then who—“
“In the last loop,” Julian said quietly, “I saw a woman pulled from the water. Third class. Dead. Hypothermia. She was clutching a hairpin exactly like this one—same bend, same monogram. I thought it was coincidence. I didn’t think about it again until now.”
Evelyn’s blood went cold. “You saw her die.”
“I saw *a* woman die.” Julian met her eyes. “I never saw her face. The body was turned away from me. But she was wearing a gray shawl, and she had a child’s hand stitched into the hem. I remember because it was strange—why would anyone sew a child’s hand into their own shawl?”
Evelyn’s mind raced. A child’s hand. A child. The note in the engine room. *The child.*
“Margaret isn’t trying to survive,” Evelyn said slowly. “She’s trying to make sure the child survives. The child she’s been hiding for twenty years. The child my father is hunting.” She looked down at the hairpin. “And she’s going to rendezvous with it at lifeboat 6 at four o’clock.”
“Which is not a quarantine,” Julian said. “It’s a trap. If your father has men watching her—if they know the child exists—they’ll be there at four too.”
Evelyn’s throat tightened. She looked at her watch. It read 2:47 PM. The ship would strike the berg at 11:40 PM. She had less than nine hours to find Margaret, find the child, and change everything—or watch them both go into the sea clutching a hairpin that had already seen one death.
She stood. “We go to lifeboat 6. Now.”
Julian caught her wrist. “And if it is a trap? If we walk into it, and your father is there, and he’s expecting us?”
“Then we walk into it anyway,” Evelyn said. “Because Margaret didn’t leave that message for us. She left it for the one person she knew would come looking.” She pulled her hand free and headed for the door. “And that person is me.”
She was halfway down the corridor when she realized what the hairpin’s presence in Julian’s memory meant—the image of a dead woman, face unseen, clutching a marker meant to be found. Margaret had been carrying that message when she died in the previous loop. She had planned to be found.
Margaret O’Leary had not expected to survive the night. She had expected to be the sacrifice.
And Evelyn was already too late to stop her.
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