The Long Night
Read Chapter 13: The Turn
The first bell was still ringing when a steward’s voice cut through the corridor like a blade: “All passengers to the boat deck. Women and children first. Lifebelts on.”
Élodie turned, Louis pressed against her hip, his small fingers knotted in her scarf. Rose stood behind her, gripping two smaller children by the wrists. Tom was already at the window, staring up at the slant of the deck—a lean, unmistakable cant that had not been there five minutes ago.
“We need to move,” Tom said. “Now.”
They pushed into the flood of bodies—dressing gowns, fur coats, men in dinner jackets still holding cigars. The second-class stairs were jammed, and the tilt stole their footing. Louis stumbled; Élodie hauled him up, her arms screaming.
Then she saw Hargrave.
He was ahead of them, near the landing, one hand braced against the wall, the other pressed flat to his chest. His face was the colour of candle wax. His mouth moved, but no sound came out. He folded before anyone could reach him, collapsing onto the stairs like a coat slipping from a hook.
“Grandfather!” Louis screamed.
Tom reached him first. He wrenched the old man’s collar open, pressed two fingers to his throat. “Pulse is weak. He’s still breathing.” He looked up, and Élodie saw the calculation in his eyes—the brutal arithmetic of a sinking ship. One old man, or a hundred children.
“I’ll take him,” Tom said. “You go.”
“Tom, we don’t know where she is. We don’t know what’s down there.”
“That’s why you have to go.” He was already lifting Hargrave’s shoulders, dragging him against the banister. “I’ll get him topside. You find Marie. Meet us at the boats.”
Louis began to cry. He squirmed out of Élodie’s grip and threw himself at his grandfather’s chest. “Don’t leave him. Please don’t leave him.”
Tom caught the boy gently, pressed a hand to his dark hair. “I’ve got him, son. I’m not going anywhere. But your friend needs Élodie now. You understand?”
Louis looked up at Élodie, his eyes huge and wet. She knelt, took his face in both hands. “I promise you,” she said, “I will find her. And I will come back.”
She didn’t know if the promise was a lie. She ran anyway.
The stairs went down. Everyone else was going up. She pressed against the current, shoulder-first, apologising in French to people who couldn’t hear her. The tilt grew worse with every deck she descended. C deck. D deck. The electric lights flickered, went blue, steadied again. She could feel the cold rising from below like breath from a grave.
On E deck the corridor was nearly empty. The few crewmen she passed were hauling coils of rope, their faces blank with a calm she did not trust. She checked the lounges, the writing rooms, the empty berths with their doors standing open—stripped of luggage, stripped of people, stripped of hope.
“Marie!” she shouted. The word bounced off the steel walls and died.
A steward appeared at the far end, soaked to the waist, holding a lantern. “Miss, you can’t be down here. The water’s reached the boiler room.”
“I’m looking for a woman. Alone, dark hair, badly bruised. Did you see her?”
He shook his head, already turning away. “Everyone’s moving up, miss. Everyone who can.”
Everyone who can.
She kept going. The corridor bent, and she smelled it then—mail-sack canvas, ink, dust. The mailroom. A single brass light burned above its door, illuminating a grille of iron bars.
And behind the bars, pressed against the wall, was Marie.
Her hair had come undone. A cut split her lip. She was shaking, wrapped in a mail sack like a shawl, and the steel door was padlocked from the outside.
“Élodie!” Marie’s voice cracked. “He locked me in. He knew I’d followed him. He—”
“Who? Where is he?”
“Gone to the boats. He said he’d take the boy himself—that he’d finish what he started.” Marie grabbed the bars, her knuckles white. “He has a pistol.”
Élodie pulled at the padlock. Heavy. New. Not the ship’s own. She looked around wildly, and saw it—a fire axe in its glass case across the corridor, the glass already shattered, the axe gone. Someone had been here before her.
She ran back, scanning the floor. A steel rod from a stack of displaced crates. She jammed it through the padlock’s loop and threw her weight against it once, twice. The metal screamed. The rod bent. The lock held.
“Step back,” she said.
Marie stepped back. Élodie swung a wooden stool she found abandoned against the wall, struck the lock with every ounce of fury she possessed. On the third blow it cracked. On the fourth it gave.
Marie burst through the door and threw her arms around Élodie’s neck. For one second they stood there, two women trembling in a drowned ship’s bowels, and then the floor tilted hard enough to throw them both against the wall.
“He’s going to the boat deck,” Marie said. “He knows the child’s value. He’ll find a way.”
“He won’t find Louis.” Élodie grabbed her hand. “Tom has him. And his grandfather. They’re going up.”
Marie’s face crumpled. “I tried to stop him. I thought if I could talk to him alone, I could make him see—but he’s not a man anymore. He’s a ledger. A price tag.”
The lights went out.
Black, total, absolute. Élodie had never known darkness like this—it was not the absence of light but a presence, pressing on her eyes, filling her ears with the groan of iron and the distant, animal sound of water.
Then the emergency lamps came on, dim and orange, and she saw the corridor was ankle-deep in seawater.
“We move,” she said. “Now. Together.”
They ran, hand in hand, the water dragging at their skirts. The tilt grew steeper, the stairs treacherous. They passed E deck, D deck, and the air turned colder, sharper, filled with smoke from somewhere below. On C deck, she heard it—a popping sound, distant and distinct, that she recognised from her brother’s hunting trips.
A gunshot.
Above them, on the boat deck, she thought she heard Tom calling her name. The ship groaned again, and the deck tipped further, and she knew that somewhere in the dark, the sea was winning.
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